The Balder's Death
SOMEBODY: Loki and Balder
WANTED: Loki wanted to kill Balder
BUT: Balder's mother made him inmune to any weapon in the world
SO: He found a plant that could harm Balder
THEN: Loki killed balder and was chained to rocks in a deep cave
This story talks about Balder, the god of light, and Loki the wicked that was always jealous of Balder's popularity desiring his dead. But, Balder was inmune to any weapon because a pact that his mother made to all living and not living thing asking them not to harm his son, but there was one plant, the mistletoe, that could harm Balder and that Loki would use to kill him. So, Loki took a sharp branch from the mistletoe's tree and went to the hall were all the gods were eating and throwing weapons to Balder for entertainment. Then, Loki gave the sharpened branch to a strong and blind god, and the god threw the branch killing Balder and making Loki the guilty one that had to be chained to a rock in a deep cave and wait for his release.
ResponderEliminarI think there is one important detail that is missing. Why isn´t it immune to that plant?
Also, You should use different connectors. However, good order and good grammatical aspects.
Good Job!